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How Hajime could improve his apology video

YouTuber Hajime is well known for his prank videos. In March 2017, Weekly Magazine revealed that he was cheating on his partner. Then he uploaded the apology video, which is not really effective in convincing the audience due to lack of pathos. Here are three improvements I suggest making that video persuasive to get an understanding of his fans.

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The timing of bow

He could eliminate the bow at the beginning and the end of the video. Instead, the bow should be right after saying, "sorry."

Video without cuts editing

It is assumed that you speak while following the script. Hajime used cut editing to keep the video consistent. Explore ways that are more natural and less manual.

Put his reflection into the talk

After finishing his perfect factual explanation, his full remorse and apology are essential. What kind of apology and how many minutes should he add?

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